you shouldn't show off in a review...
(0 for sound because my speakers were off so I don't know :/)
Anyway, I haven't checked to see if you made any other flashes yet, but its an okay start.
All i can say is KEEP PRACTICING.
Alot of idiots (like me) didn't practice and sent in a crap first submission, if you keep working hard, you'll be able to make something better than a 12 year old's imaginary TV series.
Anyway, good luck!